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Thursday night....

I agree with the "Foundations" similarity.
Having said that, it is a nice cheery number, I liked the overall feel of it, but I felt like it lacked melody and the balance is a bit off.

There's a lot of potential in there though :D

SirFurious responds:

Ok, now I HAVE to look up "Foundations". >.<

It does kinda lack melody, and the balance is off. But, hopefully the EQ patch helps fix that. Come back and hear again, and PM me with any tips off that? :)

Thanks for the honest review. :)

~Sir_Furious

Definitely has potential

I liked this piece generally, however I think the piano part could do with a bit of sprucing up (something more interesting than quaver piano chords in root position), and the sound balance is a little off, I think the melody is drowned by the backing. Really liked the second half of the piece. Could also do with an expansion, develop the melody, add a contrasting section perhaps?

These are just my opinions, but good attempt :D

Jenniiee responds:

Thanks, like i said i am new at this but i do appreciate your help :)

Love love love!!!!

^_^

*clicks to download*

Ironclover responds:

Thank you, Glad you like it :D

Just a thought...

I quite like the feel of this piece, the beginning has a sort of tranquility to it, I think it's more effective when it's left a bit sparse.

As for where it's going to go, how about a ternary (ABA) form?
Your original theme, then a more bright and lively section, then return to your original theme, and either end or loop it, when there's not too much going on I can imagine it being like a "wandering round" music in an adventure game where there aren't things trying to kill you.

I'll stop rambling. Good job though :D

Special-Ed responds:

cool ideas...
Just so we're clear though, there is a difference between votes and ratings.

:D I like writing music and shiz... Trying to branch out into video game development

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